Anyone feel like reviewing the first chapter of my first fanfic? (3700 words)

Here is a link to it. Its a Harry Potter/Dresden Files Crossover. It'll be set mostly in the HP universe, starting with Harry's first year and going until old Voldybut takes a long dirt nap. Whenever that may be.

It'll be mostly from the two Harry's PoV, with maybe a different one here or there.

Edit: Set post Cold Days for Dresden. Spoilers abound.