[Critique] The Wind Sighed, Omega (tentative title, post-apocalyptic)

I submitted this story a few months ago to r/Writing but didn't get much feedback. This is just the beginning of my short story, but let me know what you think, what you like, what you hate, etc.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VuxS5wkC_kqxbel_2eW3CEG6OLzU6AJa0wi_0mYQxIU/edit?usp=sharing

I appreciate it!