Looking for critiques of my novella

Hi,

I'm looking for people to read and critique my novella When the Iris is Pink.

Genres: Horror, dystopian, drama.

Sub-genres: Psychological horror, family drama

Synopsis:

A boy is forced to reconcile what he knows and what he thinks he knows after he realizes he might have been infected with the virus he was told destroyed the world.

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Thanks! :)

NOTE: There is a prologue, and it is written differently from the rest of the book.