[1004] Anthill, Ch. 2

[1207] critique here https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1d3los5/1207_prologue/l6ttc58/

Don't worry, I'm not going to post the entire manuscript here. I'm just grabbing the opening few chapters to get an idea of where I'm at, especially since those are the most critical for grabbing an agent's attention.

I'm particularly interested in thoughts on Aiden's sense of anxiety/worry. I'm also looking for any feedback related to publishing.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FtEM4V-6NrUOYbKibNiHIv79Pbd3hTeFXNx3Iydh0OU/edit?usp=sharing