My comic arc

I'm making a comicarc to submit to image, I'm not finished yet but here's what I have right now.

In Rascal’s world everyone is an anthropomorphic animal, and our story starts with a special rabbit named Rascal The Rabbit, who just graduated high school and he’s staying at his parents house to find a job. 3 years later at the age of 21 he starts a youtube channel called “you only live once” with his friend Orville The Goat, his first video he decides to jump into a bottomless pit. Rascal tied a bungee rope to him to a tree, when Rascal jumped it the gravitational pull was so strong it snapped the cord and got sucked into the pit.

While in the pit he got shocked with pink lightning, and it changed his personality, gave him anime hair, powerful Toon force (basically warp reality like it's a cartoon), wiped his memory, and made him go unconscious. He was spat out into NYC park, the first thing Rascal did was cause cartoonish chaos. Until he heard a woman screaming in the alley way, he immediately bolted to the rescue, after beating up the robber the woman gave 100 dollars to Rascal. Rascal then bought a cheap well made blue dress vest with a red bowtie, a short sleeve white button up, and orange pants with orange shoes. It was his superhero suit and so on he became a hero.

Rascal couldn't afford a house, so he dug underground and cut nearby trees down to build the inside. The next day police knocked on his hole door, and Rascal came out. The police asked Rascal about things in the park, he was fined for his damages of 827,000 dollars, but since Rascal was broke the police offered him another way to pay him off his fine.

They take Rascal to the mayor’s office Eric Bass, Eric gives Rascal an offer that if he becomes a hero his fine will be cleared up, every criminal removes 1,000 dollars on his fine. Rascal takes the offer and begins his quest for justice, then Eric makes Rascal’s hole an address and gives Rascal a police radio, and sends Rascal off. The next day Rascal gets called into Eric Bass’s office, Eric tells Rascal that Japan is getting over taken by