First Chapter of a EEB novel.

Hey, this is the first of a few chapters of my eeb writing project. Check it out if you want.

Constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cshIwDCIUdGZMnelJcWgguw8ujm00QFU/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=104962408830876366215&rtpof=true&sd=true