[1195] Red Eye, part 2

HI all, This is the last half of a chapter in my novel. We are about a hundred pages in now. So there is no character introduction here.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17A_lLVH5kmdKhT6Y7fHJ3ZYtt8aob2JNJ7oWsmrTn9M/edit?usp=sharing

My MC is 15, he ran away from home to get away from his abusive father. He went to live with his older sister (Jodi) and her boyfriend, a drug dealer (K)

Jodi just left to go hide out in Chicago because she killed someone.

All feedback is welcome. Even harsh feedback. I'm a criticism masochist, lol.

Thanks in advance, V.

Critiques: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1dxhrtg/1155_a_rock_bottom_a_rock_through_my_window/lc4gmux/

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1dy5r9h/482_to_be_wedded/lc6i0kk/