Big A$$ Bytes is a tribute to deliciously pulpy 80's movies, fiction, and animes like Akira. Therefore it will be quite campy, with a slight cyberpunk edge.

In this chapter you will meet the hapless Emily Lenwood, who got herself caught up in the rain and is looking for shelter anywhere she can find it. Fate will have her stumble upon a tiny restaurant in a no-where alley way. Will Emily be safe here?

Please enjoy. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LmalGGN10PFm5J4DTzhCYW87pAkkLy4E/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=101572364556642710107&rtpof=true&sd=true

Links to my other critique:

[ 1530 ] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1dvq3kd/1530_chartermark/

Note: I often see people posting links to two critiques, even those beneath 2k words. I'm under the impression we only need to link to one work, unless our own post is quite long. Am I incorrect in this assumption? If so, here is a second critique:

[ 2234 ] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1btj8p8/comment/l9x07gv/