Big A$$ Bytes is a tribute to deliciously pulpy 80's movies, fiction, and animes like Akira. Therefore it will be quite campy, with a slight cyberpunk edge.

This time I have revised Chapter 3 after receiving solid critique. You will meet the hapless Emily Lenwood, who got herself caught up in the rain and is looking for shelter anywhere she can find it. Fate will have her stumble upon a tiny restaurant in a no-where alley way. Will Emily be safe here?

Please enjoy. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qI0h9M79bEVlSC9IJS_oLi2RsLbXwvCE/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=101572364556642710107&rtpof=true&sd=true

Links to my other critique:

Critique: 1077

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1e1xpim/1077_undercurrent_part_1/

Critique: 507

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1e1xpim/comment/ldpm7cs/?context=3 -