Punjabi poem/kavita. Amateur shayar. What do you think?

Kade hass lea. Kade roh lea, Kade khushia, kade gummian

Kade tyohar aa te kade mautan ne, Dil nu har vele ik taang hai. Khore ehnu kis cheej es nu maang hai Ki eh paise hai, ki eh shohrat hai, Jis nu har vele dil hai labh rea.. Jo dunia vich dekhya ohde nal lagda ki eh sab ik bharam hai, Je eh bharam hai te shayad esnu door karan lai hi banya dharm hai

Koi dharm mannda allah hai. Koi manne raam nu, Sab da iko kehna ki japna tusi naam hai, fer kyo saare mannde ki Han asi alag te awalle Samajhde doojean nu jhalle,

Gal jo nahi bandi ki aapan kiven ho sakde Han sare alag, Sabb kuj te apna iko jeha hai, Khoon da rang te bimarian, andar dian bhawnava te jindagi jeon di tarika , Daso ki hai farak vich musalman te vich ik isai de, Bandeo eda dharm de naa te jhooth bol k nahi paap kamai de

Ishwar, allah, rabb da hai ikko sandesh, Ki tu hai 'ik' Tere vich nahi koi farak, Paapian di gallan ch naa aa ke kar apna garak.

Naa jana tere nal paisa, naa jana Tera maan Chinta te moh v reh jana hai ethe hi, Bas sabb nu ikk parmatma da hissa mann, Te waheguru da har vele bhana mann .

Kade dil tutt janda, kade dil hamesha khush rehnde, Parr tusi Kade sochya eh tikk ke kyon nahi behnda, Koi te hou ilaj es dil da, enne dharm aa dunia vich, fer v koi ilaj nahi.