My first ever poem

I know less than nothing about poetry. I'm very open to feedback even if it's harsh, please just be constructive so I can get better.

Sun warm on my back Sweat drips down my heaving chest Joy in play and effort fills my heart

Icy tips reach cloud Wild untamed earth calling me Admiration towers in my soul

Waves crash around me Salt spray kisses my body Washing me in love and desire

Wind caresses ferns Birch reaches toward blue June sky Peace and safety settle over me

The way you do

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