[1280] Prologue: The Ramblings of a Dead Man

I've had this story building up in my head for a few months now, It's my first time writing anything other than an essay and I definitely need the criticism. So far I've been relying on ai to give me feedback (not to write anything just for grammar and advice) but I need people to really dig into my writing. I've been fairly pleased with my work but I can't rely on myself since I wrote it. Its a fantasy, and while deciding how to start the story, I settled at what basically amounts to the end as the prologue and the rest will be a flashback with periodic interludes where the main character reflects on his past, The Kingkiller Chronicle style. I'd appreciate any and all feedback, even if it means I have to start back from scratch.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u6nqZVd_A18D3GnD5B5JvsriCs-BYdm2SrBz5K9N_iY/edit?usp=sharing