[2800] A Kingdom Cast

Hello everyone. I'm a novice writer hoping to get feedback on the first chapter of my novel. I'm hoping to take the feedback I receive and apply it to rest of the book. Questions I'm hoping are answered:

• How is my writing style? Is it written well? What should be changed?
• Is this story interesting? Are the characters compelling? Would you keep reading?

Any and all feedback is helpful. Be honest. I'm here to learn. Thank you for your time.

Link to Chapter:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18aJ5EcQMTs-C6UxIJUnC8vc4AibIyzYtc6s7zu7Y-so/edit?usp=sharing

Critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1ey0xef/comment/llcmnqo/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button