[2931] Tombo, completed short story

I am excited to hear your beautiful thoughts on this (potentially mediocre) piece.

Yes, I know how to use quotes. No, I will not be using them. Proof: "Look here," the writer wrote. "I am writing inside quotation marks." Now that we have quotes out of the way, please focus on whatever other constructive criticism you can conjure.

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