[1947] Atomic

Hello all, here's another chapter. This is part of a 90k word novel, and it's toward the middle, so there's no character introduction here. These are all established characters, and this is not the opening chapter of the book.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c9v6a7wz1j70V6ae4xX-HHNyOrYH4MAxDQbrixEmUNs/edit?usp=sharing

All feedback is welcome. Harsh critiques don't upset me.

TW: Domestic Violence.

Thanks in advance. :)

Critique: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1f3ijhh/2375_to_take_a_name/llfdt4d/