[2552] Xaati's Choice

This is a stand alone speculative fiction short story. All feedback is welcome.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bxrP5AhSXkiojhfmb-0mPwjj9lT4FlUlqIIn9L0xNAY/edit?usp=sharing

My Crit:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1fhsfht/comment/loa4hr5/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button