[405] The Albino Girl's guide to having fun

Got some questions, so please read it before going to comment

Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gxikECm4Kr59GHrj2cy9ZDupbfkX_i9vd6pD1DWnAjw/edit?usp=drivesdk

Don't know if this good enough critique(i think it is) but this is half the word count of my critique anyways.

My critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/WqNeZdlO5y