[717] An Argument

Hi, this is a short, standalone piece, mainly dialogue. Please have a read and share your feedback. In case you don't want to give a detailed crit for such a short piece, I will be happy to have even quick, short feedback. Thanks.

⚠️Warning: This piece contains strong language and extreme viewpoints about certain communities. (to be clear, these are views of the character, not mine) It may not be suitable for all readers, particularly younger folks here.

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