[347] An Introduction to the Sock Goblin

Hi there! I used to write tons but I've gotten a bit out of practice so I'd appreciate some feedback! This is the first few paragraphs of a children's story I'm busy with called "The Sock Goblin and the Village of the Gonks"

I'm trying to go for a humourous magical vibe so any critiques would be much appreciated!

Work

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QlgTbIwgfOUc093upzEs9V5qilWC_JseKjAUs8E76M4/edit?usp=sharing

My Review

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