[2173] Neville's Bad Day

This is a short story about a man who wakes up with a hole in the back of his head.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/136AEAGFZsggTu1_cbeP-zVw1iMq7sMBZE_7nIVJjG7A/edit?usp=sharing

Criqitues:

[2327]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1hoe9gd/2327_a_thousand_fiery_needles/m5fcglr/?context=3

[1305]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1ht7y7h/1305_while_were_still_human_1st_scene/m5g4x5k/?context=3

@Mods: I hope the critiques are enough, if not, please let me know.