[1200] The Secret

Hi lovely folks!

I kindly request a critique of my short story titled “The Secret”. Thank you for taking the time to read this work.

Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14_kzGM4O6vgg_BSpnNaQVxKeIFQNN2c7uNJeLuGN4gY/edit

Crit [1260] Tradeth Wisely

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/WmAphLqZtg