[491] Action Man

Happy New Year!

Hope you all had good holidays. A lot of new names popping up here, welcome to anyone giving RDR a go.

This is for a writing group, though I would like to take it to an open mic (spoken word - not comedy). Writing group limit to 500 words, would develop to 1k for spoken to get it at a 5min performance.

First and foremost I want an audience/reader to find emotional resonance. On a tech side, I'm trying to soft-impliment Dwight Swain's MRUs (motivation - reaction units Outside link to MRU chat). Thoughts on these in relation to the peice or a gen discussion would be great, but all comments are appreciated.

Best enjoyed in an imagined Scottish accent.

Action Man

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