Just released first Chapter of my light novel!

Finally! After so much work and drafts I'm finally able to publish it.

Honestly, I am just your typical beginner guy who has imaginations and a passion for writing, so I don't exactly expect it to be that good, but still any feedback would be really appreciated.

I have a dream of making my own manga or anime or film or something like that, but I can only write at the moment, still one day I'm sure I'll achieve that dream. My brain tells me that someday a manga artist will stumble upon my novel and offers to draw it for free, and it would get good and stuff like that, and I really hope that it might happen.

The light novel is called Power's Gambit: Time of Fate, it's kinda a long name and it describes the general idea of the novel.

English is not my first language so most people around me can't read or understand my novel, that's why I came here and I really hope you would read it and maybe like it.

This is the synopsis:

What if the key to saving the future lies in a past you're doomed to repeat?

What if your greatest gift was a lie? What if the people who took you... were afraid of you?

What happens when the past you’re forced to relive… is the future you destroyed?

Kai Paradox, an ordinary boy living a simple life until the day everything changes. Discovered as an Awakener, stolen from his family, and trained like a weapon, Kai uncovers a power that terrifies even those who imprisoned him.

A boy. A stolen power. A lie that built a war.

If you have any feedback or notes I would really appreciate it. Anyway, here's the link and I hope you guys enjoy it.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/power's-gambit-time-of-fate_32131905608449605

Thanks in advance!!