[2300] Limina

Looking for any feedback, my first longer narrative I am hoping to turn into a novel. This is my working first chapter. Would love critique on the title and name of the ship. It is Latin for "threshhold." Is this too on the nose? Lame? Just right?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1phPxGP76yvAJv3EjJ9mcGjjhKK_kgiWxfC56WS6r1QQ/edit?usp=sharing

Crit: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1jpgl5g/2412_the_eight_of_swords/mly7st5/