[1272] Reality Check (Chapter 1 Scene 1)

Since I finally have a few chapters in, I figured it was time to get some opinions on how my story is turning out. This is a story exploring the humiliation and emotional turmoil people are willing to put themselves through for money. It's about a group of social media has-beens spending a month at an "offline" rehab facility. It explores various different aspects of social media through the characters at the rehab, like beauty influencers, muckbangs, real housewives, etc.

Yes, there is a twist with the rehab. I feel like the title gives it away, so please tell me what you think the twist is so I can gauge whether I need to rethink the title.

Story

[1272] Reality Check

Critique:

[2072] Okay