[1667] Thomas-Deserter

This is a chapter from my novel, The Four Gifts, set in sixteenth-century Scotland. It’s not a fantasy genre but leans historical romance and includes violence. Story:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KOstSYZuApEauG5tDeyP9p6JSQ9W7kMEDDoUA4ittP4/edit?usp=drivesdk

Critiques

https://docs.google.com/document/d/158awgQDb7tpQQbp88JcSmwG8D1Z7iAT9joxn7n4ruN4/edit?usp=drivesdk

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G2VEZQczZVErubQVKZ7qRqiC2_2-LMn5RY6D4SjHjxs/edit?usp=drivesdk

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y0p7-yz5jC6j2-8dP_jPGpVOaNs26KKNH0359GN-lTg/edit?usp=drivesdk

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iNHM6opvwkG3gwkaTh1xH5kMT0TQ4Wtii06gpB7hHoQ/edit?usp=drivesdk