Family Business (short, 8 pages)

Format - Short film

Length - 8 pages

Title - Family Business

Genre - Drama

Logline - A young man burying a body is caught by a lost child searching for his dad, forcing him to choose between loyalty to his father and doing what’s right.

I feel pretty confident with this but was wondering if there’s any glaring issues I’m just not seeing. Overall, is it entertaining? Do you even care about the characters? What can I improve? Thanks for reading.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mCEhttPBO8aRKib_0N_nzRoJAM06bYXj/view?usp=drivesdk