Haiiii, please I need critique dawg

Ok so I'm not rlly new, well I kinda am but still. idk the terms for this sub reddit but I've been trying to just get critique from others on my music that's about it man😭😭 so please someone tell me what you think my newest track

https://m.soundcloud.com/pastelgardens3/i-dont-want-to-leave-yet-my