[2640] - MARGINALIA

A new draft, MARGINALIA.

Metafiction. Satirizes creative process / relationships.

• Is fun to read despite linguistic indulgence / 'bad writing' conceit?
• Does balance comedy / drama in a delightful way?
• Might drama elevate story from an experimental goof?
• Who do you empathize with and why?
• Did the twist reveal itself in time?
• Did sentences drag or annoy? (Where / why?)

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