Hi everyone!

I am currently working on a dystopian fantasy, and managed to get stuck on the beginning. Finally, I think I have it, but I would like some other opinions on it.

What I am most unsure about:

• Do the hooks work?
• Am I overexplaining something?
• Am I underdescribing anything important?

Any feedback is welcome!

Link: Champions-1917

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