[899] Magnus

Critiques:

2655 What Am I

1410 Duskbreaker

Hello, I've been thinking about putting my money where my mouth is and I decided to take on writing a smaller, light novel-esque piece of work. I recently came across a larger volume of those game-centric stories and I was hooked instantly so I decided to try my hand at writing something similar.

Magnus: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ytkGc6O0Z8zsruCekXaKxHCn3HGDT8_V6frSAAj4HNU/edit?usp=sharing

Also, I don't really have much a title yet... If anyone has any suggestions please put them forwards, I'm a bit at a loss myself.