[479] A Deadly Choice

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*Work contains some cursing.*

Hi All, new writer here. Working a fantasy novel and would really appreciate feedback on this intro. Especially when it comes to characterization and phrasing. But any info on whats working for you and whats not is appreciated.

Notes: This is only the beginning scene of chapter 1. Title is the chapter title.

Let me know if there are any questions. Thanks!

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