[717] The nameless, version 2

Hi friends!

This are the first 2 pages of a sci-fi novel but to be honest, more of a project for me to learn writing.

I took your feedback and completely rewrote my intro. To those who have read the original. Was I able to address the main points?

To everyone else, don't bother looking up my first version. I hope you enjoy the read!

Have a fantastic day.

Click this link to read the story

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[814] Crit

I have more crits banked if they are needed.