Dark Sun Commander Concept

I spent a good chunk of time working out a commander with a buddy of mine and this is the end result, basing it on Borys from the AD&D Dark Sun setting. I tried to stick with mechanics that are kind of on theme with that overall. I am open to feedback and criticism as it has to do with the mechanics of the card, I know the aesthetics are a little off with some words and the mana pips.

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