[1550] THE BANK ROBBERY

THE BANK ROBBERY [1550].

I'm trying something weird with this, and wondering if it works. All notes welcome. Also any pitches for a new title?

Here is a link thingy for my review. 1600 (now with extra content)
Here is a link to my second review. 784 (now with extra content)
Here is a link to my third review. [336] (extra content)