[1165] Cloak of Salvation - Sci Fi

This is the start of my first Sci-Fi novel. The whole halter is like 2500 words and that seems like a lot to make people read but this is short enough to get the story and how I write to critique. I’m open to any and all criticism positive and negative. I’m eager to learn.

So it’s known I’m not great at dialogue or at least I don’t think I am. I’m not very good at making stories long either. To make them longer I tend to pad them but I didn’t want that here so I wrote it how I’d write it normally.

Thank you for all the help that may come!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-FtuSujqEGZFme8SMMJdy_ga3WGoaQgEX-gbUYIoozQ/edit?usp=drivesdk

Critique: [319] - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/SvCPpHFLRl