How do I get feedback on the first 2 chapters of my book and its ment for teens but I’m worried it’s a little too much though I’m a teen writing it. What are the guidelines

I’m writing a book for the first time and I’m bad at describing things so here’s the description:

Jade wasn't supposed to break. After years of surviving her father's abuse and custody battles, all she wanted was to be normal. But trauma doesn't stay buried. Now, after a public breakdown and hospital stays she never asked for, Jade is left trying to rebuild from shattered pieces and maybe, just maybe, learn how to hope again. ( in rough draft form more will be added soon)

Also do you think people would be interested in reading it?