need opinions on my newest video

ive made a new tiktok acc dedicated to toca videos but i have no idea if my video is good or not and what should i do to improve on it! im gonna make a 2nd video probably on my coastal house build bc its my fav and i made a little pond there that i wanna share but i want to know is this format great? or should i switch to screen recordings or what do i do? is the length of the video enough or too little?

this is the video please give me feedback, thanks!