Tried getting back into writing after a 3 year break. Is it written well?

Hello, I have had an idea brewing in my conscience for some months now, it excites me and I think about it before I go to sleep. I am currently on 891 words and am having immense fun with it and the world building. I have attached the opening of it, please could someone read it and give me feedback!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11nDI6Jlvz8yd5S_1EkUCWbPW97FjQZ9TKZtXShzas-8/edit?usp=sharing