[967] Across

Genre: Horror/Western

A group of pioneers are pursued across the continent.

First draft - Chapter 1

Hi all, first time poster here. Trying to get back into writing consistently after a long haitus and trying to kickstart a new journey. Any and all critiques welcome, not really looking for anything in particular.
Just a quick note on the text; character names are placeholders, undecided on proper names for now.

Across [967]

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