[in progress] [855] [thriller/horror/lgbt?] bard’s well

this is a short story im currently working on, its somewhat non-fiction as its mostly based on events that took place circa 2023-2024 (probably used that wrong lmaoo)

its about this guy i had a situationship with who moved away when we were starting to get more serious, i spent a year and some months getting over him and so i thought this would be a good way to unpack everything in a slightly unhealthy manner.

the twist (and what categorizes this as thriller/horror) is that he ends up attempting to kill me in this story, almost successfully, and the perspective of the story is being told from a survivor of attempted murder looking back on how things played out.

the story has yet to progress into the more thriller side, so its mostly vanilla. would luv any feedback and constructive feedback since im a newbie at writing. i tried to not use too many “i”’s while writing this so some sentences may look a little wonky, but let me know.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-kptGXzKI2ZJSsWDlgXwIEQ-xpeVORUM4owrz9IJyng/edit?usp=drivesdk