[Profile Review] Need Honest Feedback on My SOP for MSCS(Fall 2026)

Hi everyone
I’m applying for MSCS programs (Fall 2026) at top U.S. schools like CMU, UMass, UIUC, and Georgia Tech, and I’d really appreciate it if anyone here could review my SOP and share honest feedback. I have a strong academic background, solid experience in AI/ML research, and projects. If you're open to helping, I’ll send the SOP draft to you—just drop a comment or DM.
Thanks in advance!