I made a sonnet as my wedding vows for my wife, thoughts?

oh how sweet it is to be loved by you,

bottomless bliss. Like a warm sun at dawn, 

you may not have known, but I always knew,

my soul vibrates, my heart singing its song,

I stand here now with a promise I'll carry,

to bring out your best, and make you feel whole,

to keep you safe from all that feels scary,

With all your heart in mine, I will console,

I'll be the first to wish you happy birthday,

and the last person to tell you, you can't,

I'll be beside you when you're old and grey,

and in the crowd giving the loudest chant,

My rock, my light, the soundtrack to my life.

my greatest honour, my sweet darling wife.