Making a Bird deck with my girlfriends and feedback would be nice 😊

I made a post to this subreddit Reddit earlier this month asking for advice on a Phyrexian deck and it was so helpful but unfortunately she looked at the Bloomburrow bird art are decided The Birds were cuter than the Phyrexian were cool lol so I yet again humbly ask for help and advice. https://archidekt.com/decks/14674531/bird_is_the_word