So I posted for feedback the other day and got some insanely helpful advice   
  
[https://www.reddit.com/r/LogicPro/comments/1mew1xc/what\_is\_missing\_from\_this\_track\_to\_make\_the/](https://www.reddit.com/r/LogicPro/comments/1mew1xc/what_is_missing_from_this_track_to_make_the/)  


I spent the last three days working on this track, implementing most of the recommendations offered here. Would love to hear if the kind people here could give me some pointers. Am I on the right track? Does the song have more separation between sections now? Any more tips to progress from here? I know the vocals need a lot of work  🥲 but currently recording with huge ambient road noise under a blanket so the limitations are real.  


Some of the advice I took

\- Piano sounded to midi | I changed the piano to a LABS plugin and humanized the notes a small amount

\- No separation between chorus and verses | I basically redesigned the whole song, cut away the fat and this is the best I could come up with

\- No width to the chorus | I made vocal doubles and panned left + right 

\- Added some distorted transition sounds

\- Added a slight melody with a rhodes piano

\- Added strings to the chorus

\- Added Tamborine to the chorus on the third beat

Thanks everyone!

Song update - added all your suggestions, does it sound better?