Doing Our Best - Pilot - 32 pages

Title: Doing Our Best Format: half-hour pilot Pages: 32 Genre: Comedy-Drama

Logline: After their cult-leader father vanishes, two siblings are forced to take over his twisted community as one tries to reform it and the other wants to burn it down while rival cults circle like vultures.

Hello everyone! This is my first ever pilot, or at least one I’m willing to share! This is definitely not my first or last draft but it is the one I’m most proud of. I’m very open to feedback about any aspect, but I would also love some suggestions for other places I can submit this to be evaluated. Thank you!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17rLyrtDjk732XoLlspyRaA15RpNswKTr/view?usp=drivesdk