I turned my campaign into a book, a gift to my players.

Hey!

I turned our 3 year campaign into a book. I have no intention of publishing it, but I wanted to give it as a gift to my players. I've been working on it off and on for a couple years and would love some feedback. I'm not considering myself a novelist, but wanted to make sure there weren't any errors or confusing points. I've read through it multiple times, but need a fresh set of eyes. If you're interested, i'd love to hear the feedback. It's currently on a google doc with commenting turned on.

I hope you enjoy Ember and Stone.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u7IEznuy5cOO-g0IBiTq8vk2a2b1lLah5PMqS25inBU/edit?usp=sharing