I really feel like I cooked on this one, what do y'all think? be completely honest and tell me what I need to change or improve, I think I can be one of the best in the underground one day, so I need honest feedback and judgment, so I can improve. Be completely deadass and don't be afraid to tell me what I messed up.

lyrics : 

she had a bitch ass nigga who did her wrong so now she pretend she don't give no fucks
i see in her eyes she a nice ass girl just having a hard ass time believing in love
she using drugs to cope with the pain no matter how many pills you take it's never enough
i can't even lie cus I'm doing the same I'm taking these pills addiction keep leveling up
hoe jus be yourself i don't give no fucks if you cool at school
nigga stop using these girls and calling them hoes I promise that shit not cool 
I knew girl who listened to Billie eilish and got bullied and killed herself all because she dyed her hair blue
I know it sounds funny and edgy but imagine if that shit happened to you
(the last few lines aren't recorded yet, this is just a draft of the song because I was excited to show you guys)


I think I'm top five conscious/lyrical rappers on bandlab what do y'all think of this song? be completely honest, I can take honest criticism and feedback. Don't sugarcoat anything.