Hi, I wrote this story, can you tell me if it's good? I'd love for someone to read it. it's the beginning of a long story that I'll probably continue

Aiden's a teenager boy, he's 14 years old and he loves paranormal. He loves a youtuber called Seagull.01. He dedicates himself to the exploration of abandoned places. The Music House, It was called that because every day you could hear a piano and a violin playing a slow but terrifying piece. Seagull.01 approaches the house, Aiden's watching the live with wide eyes. As soon as Seagull.01 opens the door, he finds an infinite corridor with only doors, nothing more. From outside the house's small, too small for having such a long corridor. He starts walking deeper in the corridor until he hears the door slamming behind him. He almost drops the camera. As soon as he turns around, he sees four big eyes watching him from the end of the corridor, two blue eyes, and two green eyes. He is terrified, shaking, sweating, and his eyes go wide. There are two children standing, holding hands in the dark staring at him, Seagull.01 can only see their glowing eyes in the dark. In the camera, the kids aren't visible. He takes a step back. The entity with green eyes approaches quickly, Striking his leg with a knife, Seagull.01 tries to protect himself with his arms, but the blue-eyed entity attacks him, probably protecting the other one. Seagull.01 kicks down the door in fear and runs away. Aiden watched the live with wide eyes. He only saw his leg getting injured and him running away, but of course, he didn’t see the entities attacking him. Seagull.01 finishes the live and runs towards his home. Aiden's curious, too curious, he needs to know more about this house, those entities. He googles 'The Music House.' and of course, the house came up, Aiden realizes the location might be very close to his little house, maybe over a few hills to the north. He packes a small backpack with water, a diary, a pen and a camera, he has to go there. Not now. They just had visits from Seagull.01, and maybe those entities are still angry.