Having a hard time getting anyone to read my pilot.

Hello everyone! I would love some feedback on my pilot script. Ive posted it twice and haven’t gotten any bites. I believe i’ve taken it as far as I can and don’t have any film people in my life to give me feedback.

East Nashville

28 pages

Drama/Comedy

Logline: An impulsive rocker impersonates her roommate at a country showcase, accidentally launching a buzz-worthy alter ego that threatens their friendship and upends their future in Nashville.

Feedback concerns: I’m open for any and all feedback but am most interested in the structure and language.

Thanks so much!

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/0g62kf6ie7rv7subchb56/East-Nashville.pdf?rlkey=vg0xu0n3a9k57x57ztfjmzazw&st=pdxy36zy&dl=0